As much as everyone mocks Finecast, it makes conversions such as this so much easier.
I think that you should replace the left leg, defo, take some time sourcing the leg, maybe a Scourge or Wych leg could be a good fit?
Talking of Scourges they have a good variety of ammo packs and pouches, one of those placed on your Archon's wait would tie him in, I'd also look at using a flesh tabard from a warrior.
Are you planning on using the trophy rack from the Succubus or maybe go with a PGL, or nothing at all?
Trophy racks always add a bit of stature to character models I find.
Head could be tricky, have a look at all of the plastic DE heads, choose one and dont use it again on another model - theres a really nice head on the dark elf cold one rider kit which could work well.
The cloak gives you the nice chance to add some freehand, looking forward to seeing this model done - given me inspiration to think about it myself
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