I too find it hard to read. There is too much information written here. Just write out the unit, any upgrades you have to pay for and the transport they are in.
Initial thought is that you are very very low on turn one Anti Tank shooting, because your Voidravens will be in reserve. Your enemy will spend his first turn shooting up your mobile scoring units and you won't have anything on the field to stop him. Maybe look at Ravagers, Haywire Scourge or Trueborn w/ Blasters
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