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Lady Malys
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PostSubject: Re: Trueborn - completed   Trueborn - completed - Page 7 I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 19 2012, 21:01

Aha, I did wonder! Very Happy That makes me happy. So does knowing my speculations were well received. Being right is fun too obviously Wink

EDIT: I wanted to note in passing that Kyssindree is wearing her hair bound, like Obessa said she should ... and that we now know why the name of the Kabal is the Shattered Soul. I loved that detail. It's exactly the sort of thing an Archon would do.

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PostSubject: Re: Trueborn - completed   Trueborn - completed - Page 7 I_icon_minitimeWed Dec 19 2012, 23:15

Brilliant. So many little clones, so much fun. Very clever ending, although I'm disappointed it's over. Well done.

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PostSubject: Re: Trueborn - completed   Trueborn - completed - Page 7 I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 20 2012, 22:26

What can I say?

WOW?! No, thats not enough.
WTF?! no, still seems a little too short of the mark.

... Yep, thats good. The stunned silence thing works great.

This was a brilliant read, I must have read through this at least 5 times. You're a brilliant writer mate, can't wait until you have something new for us.

Though I have to say, I only added Beast Masters to my army cause of you! I LOVE YOU WREN!
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PostSubject: Re: Trueborn - completed   Trueborn - completed - Page 7 I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 21 2012, 00:58

... all right, I'll admit to some Wren love too Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Trueborn - completed   Trueborn - completed - Page 7 I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 21 2012, 04:11

@Lady Malys wrote:
I wanted to note in passing that Kyssindree is wearing her hair bound, like Obessa said she should ... and that we now know why the name of the Kabal is the Shattered Soul. I loved that detail. It's exactly the sort of thing an Archon would do.
Well, the hair thing did come back to bite Kyssindree a bit during their duel Wink
And, yeah, what good Archon wouldn't want to make a snide superior remark about his skills/weakness/plans and keep it in the open just to show off?

@Painbiro wrote:
Brilliant. So many little clones, so much fun. Very clever ending, although I'm disappointed it's over. Well done.
Thank you, sir. I'm sure some of the other very nice writers here will still keep people entertained though, albeit perhaps with zombie invasions or something Wink

@sammun wrote:
Though I have to say, I only added Beast Masters to my army cause of you! I LOVE YOU WREN!
I will happily admit that I would like to have an official Wren model - now I just need to learn how to sculpt well enough to manage a cloak of feathers and also to do the spiky hair...ah well.

Beastmasters are deucedly fun to write for, I'll add. I kind of wish I'd figured out how to have them around more without disrupting the story flow. No such luck.

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PostSubject: Re: Trueborn - completed   Trueborn - completed - Page 7 I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 21 2012, 08:07

I too am tempted to try making a Wren model when I put together a beastmaster unit. And maybe a female incubus, too.

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