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PostSubject: Non-Dark Eldar Fiction: The Nota'Nura   Thu Apr 04 2013, 22:55

Slow Melee, slows others



Hominid
Toad Shaped
Live in Swampy Worlds
Territorial, Carnivores, Intelligent

Race name – Nota'Nura


The Nota'Nura, an amphibian race, live on their home planet of Pollinura. From the outset, the planet appears to be 833 times as dense as Holy Terra.
The Nota'Nura make their homes in the Upper Caverns located on the planet. The Caverns are well heated due to the vents from the planet's core that allow heat into them.
In order to become more resilient, more duarble predators, the Nota'Nura had hardened their skin.They also have a toxin in their body that will come out of their skin when they die that would harm anyone with a meter of them.
They Stand, at average, four to five feet tall. And they move faster then any space marine. The Nota'Nura also have tongues that can reach as far as 12 feet ahead of them. The toungues are coated in a sticky saliva that, when the tounge is pulled back, all that are touching the toungue are pulled back with it, unless they manage to break free which is rather easy to do.
There are also several salve's that can be coated onto the tounge that can be used affectively. One of these salve's is the Poisonous Salve that, after being coated onto the toungue, will make it to where if the toungue manages to penetrate skin then the poison will begin to weaken the victim and kill it.
Another salve is the Burning Salve, that burns anything on touch, although, it takes time before it is able to penetrate armour or vehicles. There is a much rarer version of this salve however, known as the Flaming Salve that, on touch, will burn a person to a crisp, however, it is not the same when it comes to armour. But if it can penetrate armour, then the person inside of it is dead.

this is what i have so far, as i am still working on the story Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Non-Dark Eldar Fiction: The Nota'Nura   Fri Apr 05 2013, 04:32



THE NOTA'NURAS STRIKE
The Nota'Nuras homeworld was beginning to become over populated and they needed to expand their civilation across more planets and set out in their Amphiras, their large webbed beings capable of flight and could live without oxygen for over a month.
They set off from their home-planet of Pollinura and came across the swamy Imperial planet known as Tervinas IIV. The planet was full of Imperial Posts and was just the right size for the Nota'Nuras to make a small civilatation on.
The Nota'Nuras landed and the Amphiras opened their mouths and the Choridae came charging out. The Amphiras also layed the many eggs they had that instantly became Bufony. The Bufony and Choridae charged the guardsmen on site.
The Guardsmen were stunned to see such huge strange toads infesting their planet that all they did was fire at them. But soon the Nota'Nuras overwhelmed them and had hardly been harmed, as their hard skin had stopped many of the bullets.
The Guardsmen were burnt and poisoned by the salves on the Nota'Nuras tounges. Large Bufidae trampled over the Imperial Tanks and were swallowing them whole. Neochora flew over head and were releasing poison sacks over the guardsmen as they swooped by.
The Guardsmen managed to kill some of the Nota'Nuras but had stopped firing at them because they soon relized that the Nota'Nuras were releasing poisonous spores on death that were killing the men.
The Nota'Nuras were ripping the Guardsmen apart and had eaten them. The Guardsmen were panicing and running away but did not make it far, as the Nota'Nuras used the Salve on their tounges to pull them back and attack them even more.
Soon the planet was nothing but destroyed outposts and the dead carcasses of guardsmen. Many of the guardsmen were nothing but pure bone after the Nota'Nuras had eaten them.
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PostSubject: Re: Non-Dark Eldar Fiction: The Nota'Nura   Fri Apr 05 2013, 05:01

An Angels of Iron fleet came by to check on the guardsmen because they had lost signal with them. A small ship came down to investigate and found a most horrifying site. The ground was full of the dead remains of the guardsmen, carcasses were partially eaten, bloody puddles were everywhere.
They found what appeared to be a strange large toad sitting and eating one of the carcasses and they witnessed another killing one of the last guardsmen. The marines left, as they figured the toads wouldn't be able to leave the planet so why bother killing them? It isn't as if they knew any better. But if this did happen again, then the Xenos were as good as gone.

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